Ode to W Donway

Posted by Spinkane 11 years, 7 months ago to Entertainment
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Reading W. Donways intro to his book inspired me to post this.


Still, a boy

Somewhere, there, ahead of the wave crest.
free to body surf, burning like a flare,
in the salty sea and tawny air.

The thunder breaks.
Fearless, he defies and dives deep
in the quiet lime green.

All of him, depleted,
chest cave heaving,
drag to the dune freezing.

Violet lips chatter
as the sun baked sand batters
his ghostly feet.
He is the victor, in exhausted defeat.

Through the nameless, sameness,
basking bodies, he is beckoned
by mothers breast.

Don a toasty towel and stand a king,
ordained by youth.

Prone on a blanket, praised by the sun,
he listens to the plaintive protests,
of the vanquished ocean.

Resting over takes him, the sun and sea combine.
With a subtle phase shift he dwells
in the domain of the divine.

Magical musician!
He is traveling somehow!
Through the venturi of the vortex,
a kaleidoscope of sound.

But a salt encrusted crab,
slumbered on the beach.
His soul is racing faster, finer,
further out of reach.

Past the gay crowds chatter,
over the chanting sea.
Straight up through
the absent clouds,
twirling to the soft and knowing hum.

Stitch


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  • Posted by WDonway 11 years, 7 months ago
    Hey, thanks, Spinkane. Some vivid imagery and live language, there, for sure.
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  • Posted by khalling 11 years, 7 months ago in reply to this comment.
    excellent. I'm smiling thinking of what you'll feel when you read the last word. you might be mad. Some readers are...
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  • Posted by 11 years, 7 months ago in reply to this comment.
    If you consider, I probably thought it would be good (which would be logical) then it’s better than good! The real truth is, you know how good it is. You created it. The payoff was when you typed the last word. I smile when I think of how you must have felt at that moment. P.S. It’s a great title.
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  • Posted by 11 years, 7 months ago
    If you’re 12 and it’s summer and you spend the day at the beach with your family and it turns out to be a perfect day, you take it for granted. Now, when you remember that’s who you are, there’s no one else you’d rather be and you want everyone to be free.
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  • Posted by 11 years, 7 months ago in reply to this comment.
    I’m reading your book. So far, it’s better than I thought it would be. Hank is about to have a sit down with Stanford Morris. Thanks for suggesting it, it’s a good book!
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